Comment by CVHS Media Studies

I think your film was excellent. Lots of great camera angles used and they really added to the suspense of the piece. Your editing in particular was skilful and reading your reflection, I can see how much thought you've put into it!

Your critique was very detailed and systematic. This is excellent, because it will help you to do even better next time.

Watch some writing/grammar isues - they're is 'they are' and there is 'over there'. Written expression is marked along with everything else in Media!

Well done, Sam.

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